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We all make errors, and sometimes, those errors can make us look like idiots. Especially when that error gets published out in the world, even though it likely went through a host of gatekeepers to get there. And that's why we're here. To shame those gatekeepers with an internet scarlet S. I don't expect you to be perfect. It takes a village, and every village has an idiot. But for the sake of your company's reputation, hire a village that has at least one member THAT CAN SPELL.

Tuesday, October 16, 2012

NOT AGAIN!

I need y'all to see this before we chat.

That is blurrier than I remember it.
Now, as we all know, you don't get to be a doctor AND have all that business after your name. One or the other, but not both. But I feel like the other language here is also kind of a mess. "U.S. Space Shuttle Missions" almost sounds like a non sequitur. Would a comma at the end of the phrase above it help? And if you were an author, and your book was about to come out, wouldn't you want them to include a date? And in this setting, wouldn't the website look better with a www preceding it?

This whole thing just feels really slapped together, and that's a shame. What do you think? How would you fix it?
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