His WHAT?

I'm pretty sure I've mentioned before that I'm not terribly politically astute. It's just not in my wheelhouse, so to speak. And honestly, I don't know anything from boardwalks. They don't really have them in Florida. They seem to be more prevalent in places where you go "down the shore," which is only up north, I think. Maybe this is totally normal behavior for an evening on a New Jersey boardwalk. Who knows? Basically, this article is filled with things I know nothing about. Well, except for the one thing.

This was my 4th try to make this readable. I think it worked out ok, right? 

This isn't the only problem in this article. It's also missing at least one comma, from what I can see. And it's clunky. And bless their hearts, they haven't made any corrections since this was sent to me a couple weeks ago. I'm pretty sure articles about the governor's "tempter" would be wholly different in content, if I had to guess what a "tempter" was. Which I would prefer not to, as would be the case with almost EVERY politician. There's far too much of that going on for my taste. I suspect the governor's TEMPER is enough of a problem. No need to add anything else to the mix.

(Thanks, CP!)